Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A who woman seeks help is murdered. Driven by a sense of moral obligation Kaameleon breaks a promise and returns to prison. Beaten, starved, terrorized and humiliated. Can he survive the sadistic guard targeting him to find what happened to five missing inmates? Kaameleon?s personality is the driving force keeping his people working to insure his survival.
This logline is all over the place. Don't try to tell the whole story in the logline. Give us the protagonist, tell us something about him or her, give us his or her goal and the main obstacle to that goal. Include a twist that makes it different from what we've seen before. Try to put it all in oneRead more
This logline is all over the place. Don’t try to tell the whole story in the logline. Give us the protagonist, tell us something about him or her, give us his or her goal and the main obstacle to that goal. Include a twist that makes it different from what we’ve seen before. Try to put it all in one sentence. That’s it.
See lessA story of three heroin addicts leading their life to paranoia and bizzare delusions after being outlawed by their family and friends.
Definite improvement!
Definite improvement!
See lessDeath has not any trouble killing anyone, but an old man hides his scythe and makes Death go back to his house to kill him, in that time he prepares a surprise for Death.
The logline does not flow off the tongue. The repeated Death, Death, Death is unwieldy. You don't need to tell us that Death has not had any trouble killing anyone. Be as concise as possible: Something like: "When a tricky old man hides Death's scythe, the source of his power, Death must find the maRead more
The logline does not flow off the tongue. The repeated Death, Death, Death is unwieldy. You don’t need to tell us that Death has not had any trouble killing anyone. Be as concise as possible: Something like: “When a tricky old man hides Death’s scythe, the source of his power, Death must find the man and retrieve it. But the old man has a surprise for him…” I’m not sure this tells us enough about the script, but it’s easier to read.
See less