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  1. Posted: August 25, 2012In: Public

    Two rival gangsters team up to track down a cop, while one wants him dead, the other wants him alive.

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 25, 2012 at 7:42 pm

    I think this is a bit too general. If you didn't know what happens in your project, would that log line excite you? It seems to lack a good hook. I'd try to work in why one wants him dead and the other wants him alive, if you can do so in a concise enough way.

    I think this is a bit too general. If you didn’t know what happens in your project, would that log line excite you? It seems to lack a good hook. I’d try to work in why one wants him dead and the other wants him alive, if you can do so in a concise enough way.

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  2. Posted: August 23, 2012In: Public

    Three generations of superheroes attempt to make peace with one another against the backdrop of history.

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 25, 2012 at 7:39 pm

    He discovers a scrapbook with clippings of all his father and grandfather's big adventures.

    He discovers a scrapbook with clippings of all his father and grandfather’s big adventures.

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2012In: Public

    Three generations of superheroes attempt to make peace with one another against the backdrop of history.

    CraigBerger
    Added an answer on August 25, 2012 at 7:04 pm

    I suppose its really the grandfather's story. To synopsize as briefly as possible, the Grandfather (Richard) gains powers from a meteor in World War II. He uses them to become a Captain America type hero. Years go by, and he has a son, Paul, but rather than follow in his father's footsteps, the sonRead more

    I suppose its really the grandfather’s story. To synopsize as briefly as possible, the Grandfather (Richard) gains powers from a meteor in World War II. He uses them to become a Captain America type hero. Years go by, and he has a son, Paul, but rather than follow in his father’s footsteps, the son becomes more of a Green Arrow or Teen Titans type, protesting Vietnam, speaking out against the Conservative government, etc. This drives a rift between them and Richard disappears, until Paul’s son discovers his heroic lineage and seeks out Richard for training as a superhero in the 80s.

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