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Eyes opened to a blue sky, peeping in through the wholes of the make shift roof, he regained from a dreamless state, ready for the day, parched, quiet, cool and collected. First things first, to the copper water tumbler,still groggy he flt better as the metallic tasting water cooled his innards.
This is not a logline. A logline is a one sentence "TV Guide blurb" that tells us what your story is about and hooks us into it.
This is not a logline. A logline is a one sentence “TV Guide blurb” that tells us what your story is about and hooks us into it.
See lessA Janitor suffering from aquaphobia discovers he has the ability to control water. He must conquer his fear to save his fiance from a malevolent man who wants to see the world burn.
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I like it, but you may have what Blake Synder refers to as "Double Mumbo Jumbo" going on here, that is, time travel, Nazis AND zombies (not to mention hockey) maybe a little much for audiences to chew for one screenplay. Also, there is already a pretty well known movie called Face/Off, so you may waRead more
I like it, but you may have what Blake Synder refers to as “Double Mumbo Jumbo” going on here, that is, time travel, Nazis AND zombies (not to mention hockey) maybe a little much for audiences to chew for one screenplay. Also, there is already a pretty well known movie called Face/Off, so you may want to change the title.
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