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A smart, new classy version of an old west historical tale that has never been told, between a well-dressed clean man of small stature and his dirty giant brutal enemy with a personal vendetta;of which takes place in a large alluring and immaculately clean gambling hall and infamous brothel, where heaven and hell plays about.
Start over. No reader wants to hear how impressed you are with your own idea. They'll decide if it's smart, new and classy. (Also, a "new version of a tale that's never been told" doesn't make sense to me). A logline should be short and sweet, tell us who the hero is and give us the hook: "The trueRead more
Start over. No reader wants to hear how impressed you are with your own idea. They’ll decide if it’s smart, new and classy. (Also, a “new version of a tale that’s never been told” doesn’t make sense to me). A logline should be short and sweet, tell us who the hero is and give us the hook: “The true story of David vs. Goliath set in the Old West,” for example.
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How about "a brilliant and original comic book character is ruined by poor casting, terrible writing and directing, and producers with no respect for the source material."
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I stand corrected.
I stand corrected.
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