1. Posted: January 31, 2018In:

    a lost military runner must team up with a soldier of the warring nation, after splitting with his navigator, in the forest they now intend to cross resourceless, before the lack of intelligence-he must relay-causes more casualties..

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Look at the need. ?Lost? & ?separated? have the same impact, you don?t need both. A lost soldier must make is way back with vital intelligence when he encounters an enemy soldier who seems willing to help, until they find weapons. I can?t see the emotion in this. Stuck in no mans land a soldierRead more

    Look at the need. ?Lost? & ?separated? have the same impact, you don?t need both.

    A lost soldier must make is way back with vital intelligence when he encounters an enemy soldier who seems willing to help, until they find weapons.

    I can?t see the emotion in this.

    Stuck in no mans land a soldier finds a lost enemy soldier who is willing to help him get home, until they both find guns causing brotherhood to turn to hatred.

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  2. Posted: January 30, 2018In:

    Question for the admins… After a log has an initial thread, and later down the line additional changes are made, can you consider a way to post updates to the older thread while being able to bump it back to the top so that people will not miss things?

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    All good comments and suggestions. What also happens is that tends to be waves. If you post and it doesn?t get commented immediately, it is easily pushed out of sight to the die on page 3. No one really goes much beyond that.

    All good comments and suggestions. What also happens is that tends to be waves. If you post and it doesn?t get commented immediately, it is easily pushed out of sight to the die on page 3.

    No one really goes much beyond that.

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  3. Posted: January 13, 2018In:

    British queen Elizabeth grandson went to Malta to find the Vanished historical Signet Ring in Malta after enshroud his identity, get out of the blue.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Enshrouded identity and out of the blue is strange for me and doesn?t talk of action. The Prince of (whatever) heads to Malta under an assumed identity in search of a lost historic signet ring hoping to ......... Whatever is his goal. Bringing joy to an aging Queen Elizabeth Restore the people?s faiRead more

    Enshrouded identity and out of the blue is strange for me and doesn?t talk of action.

    The Prince of (whatever) heads to Malta under an assumed identity in search of a lost historic signet ring hoping to ………

    Whatever is his goal.

    Bringing joy to an aging Queen Elizabeth
    Restore the people?s faith in the monarch
    Earn the love of his grandmother
    Prove he is more than a party animal

    You get the point.

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