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  1. Posted: December 7, 2017In: Thriller

    When an black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four friends and their dog set out to find him, discovering that things are much more sinister than they seem.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on December 7, 2017 at 3:24 pm

    A person disappearing is pretty sinister. You need to be specific. Imagine you have to make a decision on funding. Do you have enough information here? A single serial killer or an army of racist zombies? What?s the movie. Hope this helps

    A person disappearing is pretty sinister. You need to be specific. Imagine you have to make a decision on funding. Do you have enough information here?

    A single serial killer or an army of racist zombies? What?s the movie.

    Hope this helps

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  2. Posted: November 8, 2017In: Comedy

    When a genie in a pill bottle grants him his wish to be an action hero, a meek civil servant suffering from high anxiety must survive his mundane day job that magically transformed into a series of spectacular action sequences.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 11, 2017 at 7:38 am

    Survive and Mundane don?t really work as mundane doesn?t need to be survived. A genie grants a bored office workers dream to be a super hero by transforming his job into a series of spectacular action sequences.

    Survive and Mundane don?t really work as mundane doesn?t need to be survived.

    A genie grants a bored office workers dream to be a super hero by transforming his job into a series of spectacular action sequences.

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  3. Posted: November 9, 2017In: SciFi

    When an alien hunts a woman, she must stop the alien and save the ones captured by him.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2017 at 7:08 am

    That seems obvious and doesn?t sell me on the film. Specific details can be your friend when wetting and appetite. To escape a murderous alien and save fellow captures a woman must ...... Or pursued by a ....... rather than escape. But after the dots is where you can tell me what makes this your stoRead more

    That seems obvious and doesn?t sell me on the film. Specific details can be your friend when wetting and appetite.

    To escape a murderous alien and save fellow captures a woman must ……

    Or pursued by a ……. rather than escape.

    But after the dots is where you can tell me what makes this your story. Your original one could be a number of films. What makes yours better?

    Hope this helps

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