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  1. Posted: May 19, 2016In: Comedy

    When an accident lands sixty year old Kay in a nursing home to recover and suddenly others view her as “OLD” does she sit back and take it? Hell No! bucking societal beliefs, her families opinions and the nursing home rules Kay refuses to let granny panties and housecoats define her as she sets out to prove… aging is not the same as being dead.

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    Added an answer on May 20, 2016 at 8:08 am

    You will need ?describe her physical goal, this will define her metal state. Here is an example, you will find your own. "Desparate to prove 'old' doesn't mean 'dead' a nurse home resident ........" Now or what does she do?

    You will need ?describe her physical goal, this will define her metal state. Here is an example, you will find your own.

    “Desparate to prove ‘old’ doesn’t mean ‘dead’ a nurse home resident ……..”

    Now or what does she do?

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2016In: Crime

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 11:58 pm

    Good point. That's the problem I am having. ?I am 20 pages in and the script is working great. Condensing it to a main through line is hard.

    Good point. That’s the problem I am having. ?I am 20 pages in and the script is working great. Condensing it to a main through line is hard.

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  3. Posted: May 3, 2016In: Crime

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 1:53 pm

    It is the fact her boss believes she is talking to Police is why he wants her dead.

    It is the fact her boss believes she is talking to Police is why he wants her dead.

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