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After a special forces operative witnesses experiments on soldiers & prisoners, he abandons a promising military career & returns to the quiet life. But when a deadly outbreak reeks of government conspiracy & threatens his family, he jumps into the fight to expose the culprits & track down the cure.
I try to hit what the person wants at a life level and then put in an event that shows it. I also try to be as specific as possible. ?Underlying emotional journey is implied and expected so you don't need to hit them to hard in your logline. This will not be your story, but an example. After a contaRead more
I try to hit what the person wants at a life level and then put in an event that shows it. I also try to be as specific as possible. ?Underlying emotional journey is implied and expected so you don’t need to hit them to hard in your logline.
This will not be your story, but an example.
After a contagion is released a DC insider (be specific) pulls every string to save his family even though it may cost the lives of millions, reach a final decision of mass death or his family
See lessWhen a botched spell resurrects their evil mother?s dead boyfriend as a sentient zombie, two supernatural teens, must keep their paranormal family a secret while living in a pleasant suburbs. (Series)
The only thing I see that needs fixing is pleasant suburb is meaningless as a description. ?Perhaps give it a location. Series logline is is not a story it is a universe that you can write many stories in.
The only thing I see that needs fixing is pleasant suburb is meaningless as a description. ?Perhaps give it a location.
Series logline is is not a story it is a universe that you can write many stories in.
See lessAn orphaned young woman discovers she’s only half human when an Alien warrior is unleashed on earth to destroy the only weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, her.
An orphan discovers she is only half human and earth only defence against invasion when she forced into a life and death struggle with an alien assassin. Could be a bit long. Try to use words that are the function for brevity. A warrior sent to kill her - assassin. That sort of thing. I hope this heRead more
An orphan discovers she is only half human and earth only defence against invasion when she forced into a life and death struggle with an alien assassin.
Could be a bit long. Try to use words that are the function for brevity. A warrior sent to kill her – assassin. That sort of thing.
I hope this helps.
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