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  1. Posted: January 21, 2017In: SciFi

    When an alien experiment crash lands in his backyard and gives him strange powers, a subdued teenager must use his new abilities and protect himself from malicious space hunters.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 21, 2017 at 9:38 am

    Just a bit of specific detail to hold it together. Why are the space hunters out to get him?

    Just a bit of specific detail to hold it together. Why are the space hunters out to get him?

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  2. Posted: January 6, 2017In: Drama

    Does this sound interesting/openable or too similar to a Christmas carol?

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 7, 2017 at 8:04 am

    The only problem I see is the connection between her mistakes and her sons marriage. In Dickens there was a sense of urgency in that he had to change his ways before it was too late. If she learns the errors of her ways. How does that impact on her sons marriage. May be a bit much to ask of a loglinRead more

    The only problem I see is the connection between her mistakes and her sons marriage.

    In Dickens there was a sense of urgency in that he had to change his ways before it was too late.

    If she learns the errors of her ways. How does that impact on her sons marriage. May be a bit much to ask of a logline. I can see the style of movie, but not the story. Can you tie them together more? Why is what’s happening in his marriage something she can fix?

    Can we use that to set up a goal,

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  3. Posted: January 6, 2017In: Adventure

    When she discovers a clue to NASA’s plan to escape Earth for a new world years before disaster and war ravaged the planet, a scavenger must use what she’s collected to find the mythical “last rocket” to escape our world and launch a new beginning for mankind.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 6, 2017 at 11:46 am

    I see two tales, which is the main one. I use one story to tell a second. But that is in the script not a logline. I am left with a few questions. Fly to where to escape what. If I knew this I'd know the story. Perhaps the wormhole is a major thing, but feel like unnecessary detail in this version.Read more

    I see two tales, which is the main one. I use one story to tell a second. But that is in the script not a logline. I am left with a few questions.

    Fly to where to escape what. If I knew this I’d know the story.

    Perhaps the wormhole is a major thing, but feel like unnecessary detail in this version.

    Can you expand a bit?

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