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  1. Posted: February 17, 2017In: Drama

    Please! Review it! Thanks.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 18, 2017 at 8:17 pm

    The mental illness is only a problem if it holding a person back from other things. ?What is the impact on her life?

    The mental illness is only a problem if it holding a person back from other things. ?What is the impact on her life?

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  2. Posted: February 18, 2017In: Drama

    When a young ward of the state is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist, he sets out to find his real father before being forced to engage in criminal activities that will see him back in juvenile prison.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 18, 2017 at 8:04 pm

    Copy thin it even more, leaving room for some motivation. When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a teen trying to turn his life around must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention.?

    Copy thin it even more, leaving room for some motivation.

    When he is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist. a teen trying to turn his life around must find his real father or be forced to engage in criminal activities that will send him back to juvenile detention.?

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  3. Posted: February 14, 2017In: Student Loglines

    A group of criminals see their escape from prison when an infamous prison breaker arrive. The problem however : he doesn’t want to escape anymore.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 16, 2017 at 8:10 pm

    I read this and thought "hangover" in prison. ?Just tidy up the English. Does there have to be a main character? ?Yes and no. ?But this is selling the story not telling the story. You could start withe the desire (goal) and the obstacle. Three prison see a chance to escape when the greatest escapeeRead more

    I read this and thought “hangover” in prison. ?Just tidy up the English.

    Does there have to be a main character? ?Yes and no. ?But this is selling the story not telling the story.

    You could start withe the desire (goal) and the obstacle.

    Three prison see a chance to escape when the greatest escapee of all time is sent to their prison. ?They have to convince him to escape when all he wants to do is serve his time.

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