1. Posted: April 11, 2017In:

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England’s position in Afghanistan not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Thanks Richiev here are three version 1. When Mycroft Holmes is appointed by MI5 to investigate a plan to undermine England, Sherlock ?and his best friend Moriarty must deter his investigation all while sabotaging England?s plans for Afghanistan or 2. A young Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty plan to undRead more

    Thanks Richiev here are three version

    1. When Mycroft Holmes is appointed by MI5 to investigate a plan to undermine England, Sherlock ?and his best friend Moriarty must deter his investigation all while sabotaging England?s plans for Afghanistan
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    2. A young Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty plan to undermine England?s holdings in the east to profit from deals in Russia, while Mycroft Holmes is tasked by MI5 find who is responsible, not knowing their involvement.

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    3. Sherlock Holmes competitive and resentful of his brother Mycroft sets out with James Moriarty to undermine England?s holding in Afghanistan when Mycroft is appointed by to MI5 to monitor the region.

    I am leaning towards 3 as it brings in motivation, which leads to tone.

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  2. Posted: April 11, 2017In:

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England’s position in Afghanistan not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England?s position in Afghanistan meant to trigger a war with Russia not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

    1892 Mycroft Holmes newly appointed to MI5 investigates a plan to undermine England?s position in Afghanistan meant to trigger a war with Russia not knowing the villains are a young Sherlock and Moriarty.

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2017In:

    MAKING WHOOPI – The unbelievable true and moving triumph of the human spirit story of how Caryn Elaine Johnson’s powerful relationship with her mother helped her survive the welfare system in 1950’s Manhattan, drug addiction, and a self inflicted abortion to reinvent herself into a world- reknowned Academy Award winning actress.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    This is a marketing piece. I still couldn't tell you want the movie is about. What mechanism are you using to tell this story? Is it a series of events like a doco? Do we follow a single relationship and her growth is the back drop. If i was looking for a Woopi biopic I could tell what angle you areRead more

    This is a marketing piece. I still couldn’t tell you want the movie is about. What mechanism are you using to tell this story? Is it a series of events like a doco? Do we follow a single relationship and her growth is the back drop.

    If i was looking for a Woopi biopic I could tell what angle you are taking.

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