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When a spaceship transporting colonists on a 90 year journey to a distant planet malfunctions causing a passenger to awaken from hibernation early, he must find a way to resume hibernation or die of old age.
An interplanetary colonist wakes up 90 years early he awakens a woman rather than die alone which begins a rocky relationship built on a lie. A bit wordy. Could be condensed with a rewrite.
An interplanetary colonist wakes up 90 years early he awakens a woman rather than die alone which begins a rocky relationship built on a lie.
A bit wordy. Could be condensed with a rewrite.
See lessA teenage Jewish boy Harles in a Nazi death camp sets out to prove his love to Hitler’s daughter Ida who once pretended to be Jewish.
Just drop the names and you have a solid logline. The tradition is no names. Putting them makes your line feel strange and unpolished. They aren't needed at all, as they have no impact on the story, which is the logline function, to show story.
Just drop the names and you have a solid logline. The tradition is no names. Putting them makes your line feel strange and unpolished. They aren’t needed at all, as they have no impact on the story, which is the logline function, to show story.
See lessWhen his wife becomes a Christian, a devout atheist who believes in truth, uses his journalistic skills to prove Jesus was a myth
I'd just drop "who believes in the truth". Then you have room for the fall out. "Ending his marriage in the process" etc
I’d just drop “who believes in the truth”. Then you have room for the fall out. “Ending his marriage in the process” etc
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