1. Posted: May 3, 2016In:

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Here are a few beats.* After the cops pick her up and pressure her. ?She decides to leave town and go to her friends town and start over because she knows her boss is suspicious and that is bad (potentially fatal).* She isn't ready to leave just yet, so she has to see him. ?He sends her on a job. HeRead more

    Here are a few beats.

    * After the cops pick her up and pressure her. ?She decides to leave town and go to her friends town and start over because she knows her boss is suspicious and that is bad (potentially fatal).

    * She isn’t ready to leave just yet, so she has to see him. ?He sends her on a job. He holds her sister.

    * She suspects she is being sent to be killed so it will not be linked to him.

    * She has to find a way to get her sister back, make sure he can’t follow her (arrested or dead) and get to the new town, with no one knowing she went there.

    Yet again (my MO) I am writing about a person struggling against a crap situation beyond their control. ?They are trying to find a better life but they are stopped at every turn. ?They realise they can fail and make life better for others, or take everyone with them.

    I am writing this one to film. ?It is set in a number of telephone boxes, car interior and street. ?But the Logline is still important if and when I go looking for funding.

    Thanks everyone.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2016In:

    When America is pushed to the brink of civil war by terrorism, a president is forced to take drastic nuclear action, but in doing so kills the child of the deadliest man the world.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    'The worlds most deadly assassin comes out of retirement to avenge his son killed by a nuclear blast ordered?by the president of the USA.' ?or 'The worlds deadliest assassin come out of retirement to kill the President of the USA who?ordering the nuclear blast that killed the assassin's?son.'The reaRead more

    ‘The worlds most deadly assassin comes out of retirement to avenge his son killed by a nuclear blast ordered?by the president of the USA.’ ?or ‘The worlds deadliest assassin come out of retirement to kill the President of the USA who?ordering the nuclear blast that killed the assassin’s?son.’

    The reason for the blast may be weaved back in. ?But this is the core of the story in its raw form.

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  3. Posted: April 19, 2016In:

    A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    If it is an ensemble try something like: A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert. Not great but how I may approach it.

    If it is an ensemble try something like:

    A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert.

    Not great but how I may approach it.

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