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  1. Posted: April 13, 2016In: Drama

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 13, 2016 at 7:34 am

    Needs a little something more. ?It is a good premise, but how does the conflict play out.

    Needs a little something more. ?It is a good premise, but how does the conflict play out.

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 9, 2016 at 5:31 pm

    FFF the simple is always the best. ?His motivation is to do gods work. ?But thinks on your version. His sin that he is atoning for could be the trigger of his own insanity. nice work.... Thank you.

    FFF the simple is always the best. ?His motivation is to do gods work. ?But thinks on your version. His sin that he is atoning for could be the trigger of his own insanity.

    nice work…. Thank you.

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  3. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 8, 2016 at 8:05 pm

    No, many bad guys. ?He sees a passenger that needs avenging and carries out revenge. ?He doesn't have to change, think of?rorschach in Watchmen. ?He never changes and is willing to die rather than change. The main question is "can we endorse bad things done for a good reason". ?Can we resolve a badRead more

    No, many bad guys. ?He sees a passenger that needs avenging and carries out revenge. ?He doesn’t have to change, think of?rorschach in Watchmen. ?He never changes and is willing to die rather than change.

    The main question is “can we endorse bad things done for a good reason”. ?Can we resolve a bad outcome from a good act, just because it is a good act. ?I’ll post a new version soon. Still thinking it through.

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