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In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
Nice set up. A bit to much background (home schooled). My question is And then.....? It feels like the story is about to start. Does he change attitudes of people, does he fit back, does he seek revenge? Two hours of watching this guy getting bullied doesn't sound appealing.
Nice set up. A bit to much background (home schooled). My question is
And then…..?
It feels like the story is about to start. Does he change attitudes of people, does he fit back, does he seek revenge?
Two hours of watching this guy getting bullied doesn’t sound appealing.
See lessIn 1984, a meek high school teen is hired by the local Top 40 Station and sets out on a wild summer odyssey where he falls face first in love, and fist first into bully Bill Carter.
Most of this describes the setting. ?Plus the story appears to happen after he has set it up. ?I am guessing the girl and the bully had a previous relationship. ?I would like to know the overall goal of the story."Meeting his first love on a wild teenage odyssey, he must ..."
Most of this describes the setting. ?Plus the story appears to happen after he has set it up. ?I am guessing the girl and the bully had a previous relationship. ?I would like to know the overall goal of the story.
“Meeting his first love on a wild teenage odyssey, he must …”
See lessWhen a poor girl from Redfern learns her brother has died in the War, she must keep his memory alive by playing his favourite game- Rugby League. Trouble is, it’s 1921.
Just reorder it. ?No need to use the date as a surprise because it will be the setting and obvious in the establishing shots. ?Which war? WW1 was over by three years? ?Anyway here is how I would approach it. When her brother dies in WW1 a poor girl from Redfern is desperate to keep his memory aliveRead more
Just reorder it. ?No need to use the date as a surprise because it will be the setting and obvious in the establishing shots. ?Which war? WW1 was over by three years? ?Anyway here is how I would approach it.
When her brother dies in WW1 a poor girl from Redfern is desperate to keep his memory alive by playing his favour sport rugby league, but must overcome the racism and sexism of the time.
i am guessing you singled out Redfern as it had a large aboriginal community. ?But I am not sure that was the case in the 20’s. ?If that isn’t the case just drop all that detail; or say an aboriginal girl. ?Mostly because people outside Sydney (let alone Australia) would have no idea about Redfern. Is she isn’t aboriginal just a say “poor”.
Good story.
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