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A young woman in search of her parents finds herself in a fight for her life when an extraterrestrial warrior believe her to be a legendary weapon created to defend against the invader.
I don?t mind the original. Searching for her parent sets a scene and gives some context. Bit like a group of kids go camping end up being chased by murderer. ?Finds herself? lacks action. Find an action phrase. People find themselves falling in love. ?is thrust into...? You get the point. ?That beliRead more
I don?t mind the original. Searching for her parent sets a scene and gives some context. Bit like a group of kids go camping end up being chased by murderer.
?Finds herself? lacks action. Find an action phrase. People find themselves falling in love. ?is thrust into…? You get the point.
?That believes? – ?who believes? it needs a word there.
We don?t need to know the aliens motivation. It?s a logline not a treatment.
See lessWhen an black high school football star mysteriously disappears, his four friends and their dog set out to find him, discovering that things are much more sinister than they seem.
A person disappearing is pretty sinister. You need to be specific. Imagine you have to make a decision on funding. Do you have enough information here? A single serial killer or an army of racist zombies? What?s the movie. Hope this helps
A person disappearing is pretty sinister. You need to be specific. Imagine you have to make a decision on funding. Do you have enough information here?
A single serial killer or an army of racist zombies? What?s the movie.
Hope this helps
See lessWhen a starry-eyed, awkward girl is stabbed protecting the object of her unrequited love, her beloved?s cowardly behaviour compels her to look for another boyfriend?based on more than just good looks.
The story starts just as the longline ends. How is she going to do that? The rest is interesting but could be done in an opening shot. Tell us her quest unfolds.
The story starts just as the longline ends. How is she going to do that? The rest is interesting but could be done in an opening shot. Tell us her quest unfolds.
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