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A man is held by unseen captives that thwart his every escape attempt. He discovers that they are his other personalities that have trying to stop his most violent personality escaping and killing again.
I decided to go for the tragedy. He dies. It will be available over on Script Revolution if anyone wants to read it.
I decided to go for the tragedy. He dies. It will be available over on Script Revolution if anyone wants to read it.
See lessA man is held by unseen captives that thwart his every escape attempt. He discovers that they are his other personalities that have trying to stop his most violent personality escaping and killing again.
I am writing this and the story is working well.? I would appreciate any polishing and help on the logline.? PLUS your opinion on this question.? Should the main character die.? Originally I had him escape, but as I write it I am beginning to side with the "Other Personalities".? The only way to stoRead more
I am writing this and the story is working well.? I would appreciate any polishing and help on the logline.? PLUS your opinion on this question.? Should the main character die.? Originally I had him escape, but as I write it I am beginning to side with the “Other Personalities”.? The only way to stop the evil killer in him is to kill him.? They are all willing to go down with the ship.? Except him who has only just learnt that they exist.
See lessWhen the government quarantines the empathetic AI that she created to find ?Mr. Right,? a lonely programmer must find a way to access her AI so she can extricate his identity.
Better. But the His and connection is tenuous. She makes an AI to help her find Mr Right. Okay, I would read the treatment to see why. The AI?s personality is what she is trying to get? Why?. If the AI becomes her Mr Right let the reader know. Captain America Civil War tells you in the title what isRead more
Better. But the His and connection is tenuous.
She makes an AI to help her find Mr Right. Okay, I would read the treatment to see why.
The AI?s personality is what she is trying to get? Why?. If the AI becomes her Mr Right let the reader know. Captain America Civil War tells you in the title what is going to happen. Don?t keep surprises hidden, they are too mouth watering.
Think of the movie ?Her?,
A lonely divorced man installs an AI operating system on his PC and she comes the love of his life; eventually leaving him as well.
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