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  1. Posted: November 13, 2017In: Student Loglines

    When a toilet embarks on a journey to self discovery, his dreams are flushed away when a catastrophic injury causes his flush valve to remain open.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 3:30 pm

    It needs a rewrite regardless. Valve being stuck is the obstacle. What does he do to resolve this to reach his/her goal.

    It needs a rewrite regardless.

    Valve being stuck is the obstacle. What does he do to resolve this to reach his/her goal.

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  2. Posted: November 13, 2017In: Drama

    A lonely computer programmer, looking for Mr. Right, is shut down by the government for creating an empathetic AI, so she tries something unorthodox?interacting with a human.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 6:09 am

    This is a good character study. But you haven?t described the story. There is a few confusing issues as well. How do you shut down a person? They could shut her program, seize her equipment or arrest her. Plus you?ll need to connect the two concepts. Creating an AI and finding Mr Right.

    This is a good character study. But you haven?t described the story. There is a few confusing issues as well. How do you shut down a person? They could shut her program, seize her equipment or arrest her.

    Plus you?ll need to connect the two concepts. Creating an AI and finding Mr Right.

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  3. Posted: November 11, 2017In: Drama

    A teenage girl discovers a unique robot algorithm that cures paralyses, but when it?s plagiarised by her mentor, the only way to prove the truth, is to compete against him at an International Robotics Competition, win a million dollars in sponsorship, and grant her dying mothers last wish.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on November 13, 2017 at 6:02 am

    Want is her want/need? To fulfil her mum?s dying wish a xxx girl enters her robot in a competition coming up against her mentor who stole her technology. To prove she is the inventor of world changing tech a girl enters her robot in an international competition against her mentor who stole the technRead more

    Want is her want/need?

    To fulfil her mum?s dying wish a xxx girl enters her robot in a competition coming up against her mentor who stole her technology.

    To prove she is the inventor of world changing tech a girl enters her robot in an international competition against her mentor who stole the technology.

    After her mentor steals technology she has developed a girl enters her robot in a competition to prove …. and expose her mentor.

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