1. Posted: April 4, 2017In:

    Twenty something Sherlock Holmes and Jame Moriarty hatch a plan to start a war and profit, only to be undone by a secret government agency headed by Mycroft Holmes.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    It is not a single event. They have a plan, there are numerous twists and turns. In my world the young Holmes is evil. This story is the secret reason why he and Moriarty end up hating each other.

    It is not a single event. They have a plan, there are numerous twists and turns.

    In my world the young Holmes is evil. This story is the secret reason why he and Moriarty end up hating each other.

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  2. Posted: April 4, 2017In:

    FAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can?t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    This is a good setup. ?But what do they do? ?Look at "Sing Street". ?It has a goal "After convincing a beautiful girl to be in his band's film clip, he has to form a band and learn to play by the weekend".

    This is a good setup. ?But what do they do? ?Look at “Sing Street”. ?It has a goal “After convincing a beautiful girl to be in his band’s film clip, he has to form a band and learn to play by the weekend”.

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  3. Posted: February 21, 2017In:

    A roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy struggles to recover a time machine hidden within Elvis Presley?s Graceland in order to defeat an alien psychopath hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I can't see how his job is tied to his goal.

    I can’t see how his job is tied to his goal.

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