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  1. Posted: April 10, 2017In: Comedy

    PERTH GIRLS ARE EASY – When a space alien is chosen by his people to go to where the beautiful humans are (LA) and mate with one, he miscalculates and lands in remote Perth, Australia. Now armed only with pop culture references and bourgie lines like “I’m a producer”, he must find and convince a down to earth Aussie girl to have a baby with him or he’ll return home alone and be executed.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 10, 2017 at 2:02 pm

    Why don't you go back through comments on your previous posts and see what you can learn. What you are posting are too long and marketing, not loglines. You are getting free reviews so let's not abuse the friendship.

    Why don’t you go back through comments on your previous posts and see what you can learn. What you are posting are too long and marketing, not loglines. You are getting free reviews so let’s not abuse the friendship.

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  2. Posted: April 9, 2017In: Biography

    MAKING WHOOPI – The unbelievable true and moving triumph of the human spirit story of how Caryn Elaine Johnson’s powerful relationship with her mother helped her survive the welfare system in 1950’s Manhattan, drug addiction, and a self inflicted abortion to reinvent herself into a world- reknowned Academy Award winning actress.

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    Added an answer on April 10, 2017 at 1:33 pm

    This is a marketing piece. I still couldn't tell you want the movie is about. What mechanism are you using to tell this story? Is it a series of events like a doco? Do we follow a single relationship and her growth is the back drop. If i was looking for a Woopi biopic I could tell what angle you areRead more

    This is a marketing piece. I still couldn’t tell you want the movie is about. What mechanism are you using to tell this story? Is it a series of events like a doco? Do we follow a single relationship and her growth is the back drop.

    If i was looking for a Woopi biopic I could tell what angle you are taking.

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  3. Posted: April 7, 2017In: Drama

    When a jaded business woman tries to sell her eye-sore car to an optimistic college student, they find a time capsule of forgotten items from her youth. Bonding over discovered similar interests, they desperately try to grapple the generational gap, nostalgia and envy of each other’s lives. Ultimately, the woman is forced to either go through with the sale and let go of the past, or hold onto the car which encapsulates it.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 8, 2017 at 2:45 pm

    Focus on the emotional journey and drop the detail. Why is she triggered by discovering the items. Perhaps look at that. You can see all the emotions in your mind put them on the page. (Not your story, just an example). Disillusioned with life, a woman while getting her car ready to sell finds itemsRead more

    Focus on the emotional journey and drop the detail.

    Why is she triggered by discovering the items. Perhaps look at that.

    You can see all the emotions in your mind put them on the page. (Not your story, just an example).

    Disillusioned with life, a woman while getting her car ready to sell finds items that triggers her start a journey to rediscover herself and question her own life choices.

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