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Two career tramps, a yachtsman and an ex-actress, falling in love team up and live swindling the jet set ? but they risk losing it all when yachtsman?s ex-wife comes undercover for an IRS sting
I'd drop 'career tramps'. ?Tramps tends to bring about images of homeless and this conflicts with the jetset image. Otherwise I can see your movie. ?Perhaps ground it in a time and place. ?Specific details can be a friend. ?You could even drop the detail about their relationship. Saves some words, gRead more
I’d drop ‘career tramps’. ?Tramps tends to bring about images of homeless and this conflicts with the jetset image.
Otherwise I can see your movie. ?Perhaps ground it in a time and place. ?Specific details can be a friend. ?You could even drop the detail about their relationship.
Saves some words, give you more room for story. ?Unlike my fellow reviewers I don’t see the need for likable characters. ?I think compelling characters are more important than likable people. ?Remember the logline is the shortest path through your story in the most interesting and engage path.
Character development etc is for your treatment or synopsis.
Try this (less than 30 words).
‘A yachtsman and an ex-actress, live the high life swindling the jet set, but danger arrives in the form of his ex-wife working undercover for the IRS.’
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