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When an exhausted Driver contemplating a life change, receives an ultimatum to go into work on his day off. He must deal with an assorted bunch of characters, who will shape what direction he will take his life.
If this Locke I see it as something different A man desperate to do the right thing, drives to birth of his illegitimate child, ringing everyone in his life trying to explain his actions.
If this Locke I see it as something different
A man desperate to do the right thing, drives to birth of his illegitimate child, ringing everyone in his life trying to explain his actions.
See lessA Montana preacher rides across a fading wild west to see his outlaw daughter one last time before she hangs for train-robbing and decide if he will break his moral code to save her.
It works but don't leave it with a question. ?Leaving it unanswered does say what the story is, it is marketing. Plus "save her" could be a little vague.
It works but don’t leave it with a question. ?Leaving it unanswered does say what the story is, it is marketing.
Plus “save her” could be a little vague.
See lessWhen his sister goes missing during a murderous rampage in a haunted house, an immature teenager must take on the responsibility of finding her before the killer does, but not all is as it seems.
I'd drop the "but not all is as it seems". ?A murderous rampage isn't an everyday occurrence, so it isn't what I seemed my day would be. ?If you are hinting that the sister is the murderer, then say it. ?But if it is the twist at the end, you could say it more directly and sell it as a twist. "WhenRead more
I’d drop the “but not all is as it seems”. ?A murderous rampage isn’t an everyday occurrence, so it isn’t what I seemed my day would be. ?If you are hinting that the sister is the murderer, then say it. ?But if it is the twist at the end, you could say it more directly and sell it as a twist.
“When his sister goes missing during a murderous rampage in a haunted house, a teenager must stay behind to finding her before the killer does”. ?Immature doesn’t tell me enough. ?Is he child like, is he sulky, is he naive, what sort of immature. ?”Take on the responsibility..” does have urgency. ?It sounds like he has left school and got a job to support his family. ?I put in “Stay behind” because it is an action and that is important in a horror.
Otherwise not bad. ?I need to know more about the story.
If you are hinting that the sister is the killer.
“When his sister goes missing during a murderous rampage in a haunted house, a teenager must stay behind to finding her before the killer does, only to discover she is the killer now pursuing him”.
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