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Keira, a warrior just shy of her sixteenth birthday, will have to survive the creatures of a world twisted by the DNA Wars, and hope her own mutation doesn’t degenerate further as she tries to reach the City of Lights where she will be free from persecution.
A few things off the bat. You don't need names, no one uses them. DNA wars doesn't mean anything and isn't really part of the story, it is back story. In other words, the war will not be filmed. Here is what I would write. A young female warrior desperate to escape persecution heads for the City ofRead more
A few things off the bat. You don’t need names, no one uses them. DNA wars doesn’t mean anything and isn’t really part of the story, it is back story. In other words, the war will not be filmed.
Here is what I would write.
A young female warrior desperate to escape persecution heads for the City of Light pursuded DNA modified creatures while her own mutation degrades.
I hope this helps.
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