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  1. Posted: July 26, 2016In: Action

    After she’s betrayed doing a one time mission for the government, a broke data smuggler must decode the data packet encrypted in her brain to use as a bargaining chip for her life.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 27, 2016 at 10:27 am

    What does she want? What is aim? This maybe a way into the story.

    What does she want? What is aim? This maybe a way into the story.

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  2. Posted: July 25, 2016In: Action

    To stop the government weaponising a clean energy formula, a rebellious scientist uploads it into her mind and must find a suitable donor for the formula before it fades away forever.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 26, 2016 at 9:34 am

    I need some connective tissue here. How does uploading it stop it from being used? I am guessing it to is a theft. Why is it fading? How is it uploaded? Matrix style plug in the head? The gaps are a little big for me to fill in.

    I need some connective tissue here. How does uploading it stop it from being used? I am guessing it to is a theft.

    Why is it fading?

    How is it uploaded? Matrix style plug in the head?

    The gaps are a little big for me to fill in.

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  3. Posted: July 24, 2016In: SciFi

    After becoming immune to their technology that predicts and alters our choices, a young woman must stop a secret society’s twisted plan for humanity’s future.

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    Added an answer on July 24, 2016 at 10:35 am

    Free humanity is an outcome not an action. I can't see what kind of film this is based on that. It could be an action film or a political thriller both would work. Plus I find the order challenging. After becoming immune to a technology that predicts behaviour used by a group used to manipulate humaRead more

    Free humanity is an outcome not an action. I can’t see what kind of film this is based on that. It could be an action film or a political thriller both would work.

    Plus I find the order challenging.

    After becoming immune to a technology that predicts behaviour used by a group used to manipulate humanity a young must …..

    Still wordy, but it progresses in a film like order, which I think helps.

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