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A reluctant Witch rescues a repentant Witch hunter to save her family and investigate a conspiracy that could destroy Elizabethan England.
New version is much better. You could reverse the goals, conspiracy then family perhaps. So the goals seem to be better in a stakes POV.
New version is much better. You could reverse the goals, conspiracy then family perhaps. So the goals seem to be better in a stakes POV.
See lessA reluctant Witch rescues a repentant Witch hunter to save her family and investigate a conspiracy that could destroy Elizabethan England.
Sorry I can't see the story. How is England destroyed by a conspiracy and is that related to her family. Is saving the hunter the story or an event in the story? Perhaps A Witch must team with a Witch hunter to end a conspiracy saving her family and England.
Sorry I can’t see the story. How is England destroyed by a conspiracy and is that related to her family. Is saving the hunter the story or an event in the story?
Perhaps
A Witch must team with a Witch hunter to end a conspiracy saving her family and England.
See lessAn orphaned young woman discovers she’s only half human when an Alien warrior is unleashed on earth to destroy the only weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, her.
An orphan discovers she is only half human and earth only defence against invasion when she forced into a life and death struggle with an alien assassin. Could be a bit long. Try to use words that are the function for brevity. A warrior sent to kill her - assassin. That sort of thing. I hope this heRead more
An orphan discovers she is only half human and earth only defence against invasion when she forced into a life and death struggle with an alien assassin.
Could be a bit long. Try to use words that are the function for brevity. A warrior sent to kill her – assassin. That sort of thing.
I hope this helps.
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