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When a hyper-sexualised girl band becomes trapped by a psychopathic religious woman, a pop singer must kill her band and manipulate her captor to escape.
Why must she kill them? It is just stated and doesn't propel the story.
Why must she kill them? It is just stated and doesn’t propel the story.
See lessWhen an android bodyguard assassinates the President during a training simulation, a Systems Analyst believed responsible must abduct the android for protection while finding the culprit.
For brevity you could drop the training. For protection seems strange. Is it to also prove he's innocent? If yes focus on that. I'd also start with 'After' it seems to add a feeling of immediacy to your logline.
For brevity you could drop the training. For protection seems strange. Is it to also prove he’s innocent? If yes focus on that. I’d also start with ‘After’ it seems to add a feeling of immediacy to your logline.
See lessA struggling rock band must fight through petty rivalries, a dickhead manager and the zombie apocalypse, saving their band and the world on their way to the top.
It does need a specific goal that the story revolves around. You've got the bones, people and drama between them. How do they save the world? Is it a huge story "World War Z" or small "Shaun of the dead".
It does need a specific goal that the story revolves around. You’ve got the bones, people and drama between them.
How do they save the world? Is it a huge story “World War Z” or small “Shaun of the dead”.
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