1. Posted: August 11, 2016In:

    A bloodthirsty psychopath traumatized by the murder of his mother forms a group of dangerous terrorists with the goal of avenging his mother and destroying the criminals and gangsters of his town. He is later ought to face a famous and intelligent detective.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    To avenge his mother's murder a man enlists a group of terrorists for a murderous rampage against the criminal underworld he blames.

    To avenge his mother’s murder a man enlists a group of terrorists for a murderous rampage against the criminal underworld he blames.

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  2. Posted: August 11, 2016In:

    When a high school kid suspects his father is responsible for a series of grisly prostitute murders, he teams up with a plucky young call girl to positively identify and stop the murderer.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I am left with the question "why not just tell the police?". You may struggle with people thinking this. A teenage boy teams with a young prostitute to prove his dad is a serial killer.

    I am left with the question “why not just tell the police?”. You may struggle with people thinking this.

    A teenage boy teams with a young prostitute to prove his dad is a serial killer.

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  3. Posted: August 10, 2016In:

    When a botched spell resurrects their evil mother?s dead boyfriend as a sentient zombie, two supernatural teens, must keep their paranormal family a secret while living in a pleasant suburbs. (Series)

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The only thing I see that needs fixing is pleasant suburb is meaningless as a description. ?Perhaps give it a location. Series logline is is not a story it is a universe that you can write many stories in.

    The only thing I see that needs fixing is pleasant suburb is meaningless as a description. ?Perhaps give it a location.

    Series logline is is not a story it is a universe that you can write many stories in.

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