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  1. Posted: August 17, 2016In: Public

    On Loglines: There are certain answers to logline problems that many of us seem to repeat as we give advice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 17, 2016 at 4:28 pm

    There are repeated mistakes by baby writers. They tend to think the first act is the story. So the same advice is given "nice setup but what's the story".

    There are repeated mistakes by baby writers. They tend to think the first act is the story. So the same advice is given “nice setup but what’s the story”.

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  2. Posted: August 12, 2016In: Drama

    Relationship between the group of friends change as they take trip to Vegas.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 12, 2016 at 10:46 am

    Like how short it is. ?But how does it change? Who wants it to change? How does it impact on them? ?Here are my takes. A road trip to Vegas is derailed when two out of four friends start a relationship that the others are determined to prevent. Two couple on a trip to Vegas have a wild night of passRead more

    Like how short it is. ?But how does it change? Who wants it to change? How does it impact on them? ?Here are my takes.

    A road trip to Vegas is derailed when two out of four friends start a relationship that the others are determined to prevent.

    Two couple on a trip to Vegas have a wild night of passion and partner swapping. ?One person from each side want a repeat performance, the others want to forget.

    it can go anywhere, it’s up to you to tell us.

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  3. Posted: August 12, 2016In: Action

    A repentant terrorist decided to erase his memory and start over new life, but soon he was chased by his past

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 12, 2016 at 10:39 am

    Look at the film "a history of violence", a hitman with memory loss is discovered by his enemies after he foils a robbery and appears on the news. ?I find chased by his past a bit ambiguous. ?The authorities want to prosecute him? People want revenge? Or fellow terrorists try to kill him? hope thisRead more

    Look at the film “a history of violence”, a hitman with memory loss is discovered by his enemies after he foils a robbery and appears on the news. ?I find chased by his past a bit ambiguous. ?The authorities want to prosecute him? People want revenge? Or fellow terrorists try to kill him?

    hope this helps.

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