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After a popular police officer is suspended indefinitely for shooting a black teen, a desk duty officer seizes his opportunity to be a hero, serving as his town’s only source of law enforcement when the rest of the police force protests by calling in “sick” for a week.
I like it, but can't see how the suspension links to his story. Can you supply some connective tissue. Otherwise here's my version. A small town desk cop become a local hero when every other cop calls in with the flu. Is there a big event that coincides?
I like it, but can’t see how the suspension links to his story. Can you supply some connective tissue. Otherwise here’s my version.
A small town desk cop become a local hero when every other cop calls in with the flu.
Is there a big event that coincides?
See lessAn aging radical’s suicide reunites seven of his college cohorts to mourn and reflect on the gap between their youthful ideals and their middle-aged conformity.
I am not sure how to write an ensemble logline. I like what you have.
I am not sure how to write an ensemble logline. I like what you have.
See lessA terrifying dream, twisted by a crafty Vizier, drives an ageing king to dispose his new-born grandson heir in the wild mountains. 18 Years later the aged king discovers the Royal Games Gladiator Winners pedigree
Good setup. But who does what and why? Eg I think the story hinges on why enter the gladiator comp and what does winning bring. A newborn prince left to die in the mountains by his aging and tormented father the King, at 18 returns as a gladiator to win the Royal Games and his right to the throne. TRead more
Good setup. But who does what and why? Eg
I think the story hinges on why enter the gladiator comp and what does winning bring.
A newborn prince left to die in the mountains by his aging and tormented father the King, at 18 returns as a gladiator to win the Royal Games and his right to the throne.
This is probably not your story. But this version has some action and motive.
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