1. Posted: August 24, 2016In:

    After being imprisoned for a crime she didn’t commit, a young Christian Performer struggles against self doubt to find a way to use music to unite the prisoners and prove that God is her redeemer.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    A single prisoner is a good story telling device. Don't want to rewrite your story, but what about if she goes to prison as moral decision. She made an oath before God to keep a secret. She is sent to prison for contempt of court for refusing to answer a question .

    A single prisoner is a good story telling device.

    Don’t want to rewrite your story, but what about if she goes to prison as moral decision. She made an oath before God to keep a secret. She is sent to prison for contempt of court for refusing to answer a question .

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  2. Posted: August 24, 2016In:

    A good father and respected police officer is prisoned after he accidentally shot a young child, who was in the driving away robber?s car. He is trying to get his life back with a support of citizens of his city.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Is there an event that gives an example of him trying to get his life back together? Is the story post release? Good concept. After serving a sentence for shooting a child accidentally a cop ...... In an attempt to get his life back together. Fill in the gap

    Is there an event that gives an example of him trying to get his life back together?

    Is the story post release? Good concept.

    After serving a sentence for shooting a child accidentally a cop …… In an attempt to get his life back together.

    Fill in the gap

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  3. Posted: August 23, 2016In:

    David, a young aspiring drummer growing up in the 1980s struggles through the challenges of adolescence and finds that friendship, music, and the human spirit are the mightiest weapons of all.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    It could be a great story for a logline, what is the weapons used against, bullying, poverty etc Give me that and loglines will just pour out. Plus what triggers everything.

    It could be a great story for a logline, what is the weapons used against, bullying, poverty etc

    Give me that and loglines will just pour out. Plus what triggers everything.

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