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When her family railroad falls apart, a driven woman fights against her incompetent brother, increasing regulation and mysteriously disappearing businessmen, to save her family business. -Atlas Shrugged-
Fight against is vague. Try to give goal-action-outcome. A woman must ..... to save her families failing railroad, all the while hampered by her incompetent brother and increasing regulation. Then try to refine it to its care idea
Fight against is vague. Try to give goal-action-outcome.
A woman must ….. to save her families failing railroad, all the while hampered by her incompetent brother and increasing regulation.
Then try to refine it to its care idea
See lessA local message carrier, mid 20’s, travels to an island to tell a woman villager her mother died in the city. But something made him keep the news to himself, and begged never to return again.
The age thing is only important if is part of the story, baby in nappy completely different to man in nappy.You have said what leads up to the story and what happens after the story. Not the actual story.If I was a producer what could I assess about the story? ?What happens, is it a love story, a hoRead more
The age thing is only important if is part of the story, baby in nappy completely different to man in nappy.
You have said what leads up to the story and what happens after the story. Not the actual story.
If I was a producer what could I assess about the story? ?What happens, is it a love story, a horror story, a thriller or even a sports bio-pic.
I just can’t tell.
See lessA horrendous tragedy befalls the Golden Boy of corporate America and his Fianc? forcing them to deal with it in two different but equally destructive ways, taking one of them to the brink of life and death.
Need to know the tragedy. If the story is how two deal with tragedy, good idea. But you need some specificity. Brink of life and death is also a bit vague. It feels more marketing than story.
Need to know the tragedy. If the story is how two deal with tragedy, good idea. But you need some specificity.
Brink of life and death is also a bit vague. It feels more marketing than story.
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