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  1. Posted: July 17, 2016In: SciFi

    10yr old Ava likes to play with robots, but when a terrorist attack leaves her town devastated, Ava becomes determined to make her robot protect people and make everyone smile again.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 17, 2016 at 7:49 pm

    Make everyone smile is a bit vague. After a terrorist attack a ten year old girl robot enthusiast turns her robots into protectors for her home town. Hope this helps, loglines tend not sure to have names in them.

    Make everyone smile is a bit vague.

    After a terrorist attack a ten year old girl robot enthusiast turns her robots into protectors for her home town.

    Hope this helps, loglines tend not sure to have names in them.

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  2. Posted: July 17, 2016In: Examples

    In a dystopic future where humanity is sterile, a disillusioned man must escort the first pregnant woman in 18 years to a safe haven.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 17, 2016 at 7:33 pm

    I thought of it as a story of redemption. "In a distopian future, devoid of children, a broken man finds purpose rescuing the first pregnant woman in 18 years and getting to an off-shore safe haven" Could do with a rewrite to tighten.

    I thought of it as a story of redemption.

    “In a distopian future, devoid of children, a broken man finds purpose rescuing the first pregnant woman in 18 years and getting to an off-shore safe haven”

    Could do with a rewrite to tighten.

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  3. Posted: July 17, 2016In: Horror

    Roseline is running to protect her way of life because of her unwanted unborn child. She finds a way to keep her world by making a deal with a cult to rid her of the child but unbeknownst to her, the child lives as a spirit. This spirit, Atlas, loves his mother but soon he finds the truth behind her actions and is sent spiraling into confusion and rage.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 17, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Some things. Terms are a bit vague, like running to keep her life. What does that mean. ?You have few words, be direct.So so the spirit has a rage, again action, what does he do and how does that impact her? ?Here is my version, probably not your story."The spirit of an unborn child seeks revenge onRead more

    Some things. Terms are a bit vague, like running to keep her life. What does that mean. ?You have few words, be direct.

    So so the spirit has a rage, again action, what does he do and how does that impact her? ?Here is my version, probably not your story.

    “The spirit of an unborn child seeks revenge on his mother after learning of this occult driven?abortion.”

    Hope this helps.

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