1. Posted: July 13, 2016In:

    Obsessed with causality, a mathematician creates future simulation software only for it to predict he’ll die in three days unless he is prepared to kill a complete stranger, who is somehow connected to his fate, but instead he begins falling for her

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I think the failing business is far less important than preventing your death. ?It is also window dressing (I am guilty of this in my loglines). My take on your line would be: "A man must kill a woman identified by software as the trigger?of a chain of events that will kill him. ?Unfortunately he isRead more

    I think the failing business is far less important than preventing your death. ?It is also window dressing (I am guilty of this in my loglines).

    My take on your line would be:
    “A man must kill a woman identified by software as the trigger?of a chain of events that will kill him. ?Unfortunately he is falling in love with her”

    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: July 15, 2016In:

    Robots were not the cause of mankind’s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    There is heaps you can read about writing a logline. ?Originally it was a way for studio's to enter what a script was about into their "Log" of scripts. ?They needs a Logline. ?From there it has become a tradition to help clarify ideas and sharpen what makes a script saleable. Titanic - A socialiteRead more

    There is heaps you can read about writing a logline. ?Originally it was a way for studio’s to enter what a script was about into their “Log” of scripts. ?They needs a Logline. ?From there it has become a tradition to help clarify ideas and sharpen what makes a script saleable.

    Titanic – A socialite wanting to escape her abusive fiance falls in love with a penniless artist on board Titanic. ?You get the point. ?There is a formula but that doesn’t always fit.

    Think about – Who, What they want, What they have to do to get what they want , Want or Who is stopping them and What do they do to overcome any obstacles.

    Like the world. ?Interested to read your logline.

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  3. Posted: July 14, 2016In:

    After being held hostage on a first date for her suitor’s substantial drug debt, a teenage girl must rob her parents anonymously.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    You can drop the being held. Plus first date does hint less connection. It could be explained in the script not the logline."So to pay for her dates substantial drug debt a girl must rob her parents."Now how does she rob them and what comes from that, does she fail?

    You can drop the being held. Plus first date does hint less connection. It could be explained in the script not the logline.

    “So to pay for her dates substantial drug debt a girl must rob her parents.”

    Now how does she rob them and what comes from that, does she fail?

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