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  1. Posted: May 10, 2016In: Adventure

    When a plane crashes in the Alaska wilderness, two remaining survivors must find civilization before winter.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 10, 2016 at 10:38 pm

    The pressing question for me is, do they wait for rescue or do they try and walk out? if they walk, why? "the only survivors of a plane crash in the Alaskian woods, a toddler and a thirty year old female photographer, must make the forty mile trek to safety" Not good, but it is a story. I hope thisRead more

    The pressing question for me is, do they wait for rescue or do they try and walk out?

    if they walk, why?

    “the only survivors of a plane crash in the Alaskian woods, a toddler and a thirty year old female photographer, must make the forty mile trek to safety”

    Not good, but it is a story. I hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: May 8, 2016In: Thriller

    A woman cop uncovers scary evidence of an old murder and battles long-imbedded terrors to catch the serial killer before she becomes the next victim.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 8, 2016 at 12:01 pm

    Why would she become the next victim? Tie that in and it will make the story feel bigger and more together.

    Why would she become the next victim? Tie that in and it will make the story feel bigger and more together.

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  3. Posted: May 4, 2016In: Comedy

    When he is laid off from his dream job, Joe is surprised to find his major emotion is happiness, so he reviews how he got here to understand why.

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    Added an answer on May 6, 2016 at 1:17 pm

    Watch "LOST IN AMERICA" (1985). ?It is about two high paid exec that sell their house and decide to take the money and move to somewhere... they don't know where, just out of the rat race. Watch that and write a logline for it. ?You'll see that there is an incident that triggers their decision and iRead more

    Watch “LOST IN AMERICA” (1985). ?It is about two high paid exec that sell their house and decide to take the money and move to somewhere… they don’t know where, just out of the rat race.

    Watch that and write a logline for it. ?You’ll see that there is an incident that triggers their decision and is fuelled by the thought of freedom.

    So what does Joe do? ?Write a list? – bit of a boring story. ?Visit friends? – so how does that look.

    You understand. ?Look at the events and challenges her will face. ?Plus Joe may be better as “a man in his forties” or “a workaholic man” , Joe gives us no insight.

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