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  1. Posted: May 6, 2016In: Horror

    When seven actors arrive ready to shoot a horror movie but the location is desert. Soon they start dying just as the script describes.

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    Added an answer on May 6, 2016 at 1:09 pm

    I think you are relying a little to much on the reader understanding the genre. ?It feels like your typical slasher/horror film (which I like). ?But what makes your one different. What are their biggest challenges. ?Like why not just leave? ?A deserted location can still be in the centre of a largeRead more

    I think you are relying a little to much on the reader understanding the genre. ?It feels like your typical slasher/horror film (which I like). ?But what makes your one different.

    What are their biggest challenges. ?Like why not just leave? ?A deserted location can still be in the centre of a large town or city. ?If we are just watching lambs getting slaughtered one by one, what are the lambs doing to protect themselves. ?Plus we normally end up with the super-blond that survives, how does that happen in your story.

    I think it has merit. ?The concept of the script being the method of victim selection is nice.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2016In: Crime

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 11:58 pm

    Good point. That's the problem I am having. ?I am 20 pages in and the script is working great. Condensing it to a main through line is hard.

    Good point. That’s the problem I am having. ?I am 20 pages in and the script is working great. Condensing it to a main through line is hard.

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  3. Posted: May 3, 2016In: Crime

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 1:53 pm

    It is the fact her boss believes she is talking to Police is why he wants her dead.

    It is the fact her boss believes she is talking to Police is why he wants her dead.

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