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After uncovering a conspiracy plotted by the king a Templar is forced to intervene in the king’s plot before it leads to civil war.
Be more specific in his actions. Impeding doesn't seem to work. You can impede something. I don't think you can 'impede in'. If you can't be specific in action focus on motive, wants and needs.
Be more specific in his actions. Impeding doesn’t seem to work. You can impede something. I don’t think you can ‘impede in’.
If you can’t be specific in action focus on motive, wants and needs.
See lessWhen America is pushed to the brink of civil war by terrorism, a president is forced to take drastic nuclear action, but in doing so kills the child of the deadliest man the world.
'The worlds most deadly assassin comes out of retirement to avenge his son killed by a nuclear blast ordered?by the president of the USA.' ?or 'The worlds deadliest assassin come out of retirement to kill the President of the USA who?ordering the nuclear blast that killed the assassin's?son.'The reaRead more
‘The worlds most deadly assassin comes out of retirement to avenge his son killed by a nuclear blast ordered?by the president of the USA.’ ?or ‘The worlds deadliest assassin come out of retirement to kill the President of the USA who?ordering the nuclear blast that killed the assassin’s?son.’
The reason for the blast may be weaved back in. ?But this is the core of the story in its raw form.
See lessAfter an unemployed single dad loses his home, he struggles to get it back by working for the corrupt real estate broker who evicted him.
I was left asking where is the tension. ?I can see heaps of opportunities, but what are you using? 1) While working he discovers the corruption that meant he could have kept his home. ?So he going to bring down the RE. 2) He is seduced by the money corruption brings and becomes as bad as the RE, onlRead more
I was left asking where is the tension. ?I can see heaps of opportunities, but what are you using?
1) While working he discovers the corruption that meant he could have kept his home. ?So he going to bring down the RE.
2) He is seduced by the money corruption brings and becomes as bad as the RE, only to have an awakening later.
3) He works to bring the corruption to out in the open to get revenge.
4) He somehow uses the corruption as leverage to get his house back – a there and back again story.
I wouldn’t worry if the RE knows the person or not. ?It may even be good to have the RE acknowledge that he knows. ?Even more of a power trip “I took your home and now you work for me” vibe.
I can see so many avenue, which one you heading down?
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