1. Posted: May 1, 2016In:

    An undercover officer with a cocaine addiction infiltrates a gang of drug runners, and a blood bath ensues when a heist goes wrong and a rival cartel hunts them down for revenge.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Don't wish to attack my fellow reviewers. But there is nothing unique, it's all in the execution. Lion King and Hamlet are the same story. Taking part in a drug hiest that turns into a massacre a drug addicted undercover cop is being hunted by the cartel out to get revenge. It does cover the incitinRead more

    Don’t wish to attack my fellow reviewers. But there is nothing unique, it’s all in the execution. Lion King and Hamlet are the same story.

    Taking part in a drug hiest that turns into a massacre a drug addicted undercover cop is being hunted by the cartel out to get revenge.

    It does cover the inciting incident but not his goals or how the story unfolds. Which is the execution.

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  2. Posted: April 30, 2016In:

    When a journalist discovers a cult crucifying men in the desert, he believes he has the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it..

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Yep it does everything it needs.

    Yep it does everything it needs.

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  3. Posted: April 30, 2016In:

    When his wife and daughter are both kidnapped and held in different locations, an emotionally stunted man must choose which one to save in a race against time.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Good in this form except for the emotionally stunted. The term is vague. It doesn't add to the story as it doesn't inform the decision making. You can just remove it and it works. Perhaps try the answering "why not call the cops".

    Good in this form except for the emotionally stunted. The term is vague. It doesn’t add to the story as it doesn’t inform the decision making. You can just remove it and it works.

    Perhaps try the answering “why not call the cops”.

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