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  1. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Thriller

    Waking up in hospital a soldier is told it is three years after his last memory. But people seem to be very interested about what he remembers about the war. He must figure out if he is sick or part of an elaborate scam to get information.

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    Added an answer on April 21, 2016 at 12:31 pm

    The reason I am struggling with setting is the technology. WW2 affords the luxury of no mobile phones, no internet. It is easier to keep him in the dark. From McGuffin POV it might be possible (tricky but possible) to have the audience learn what he knows as he figures out what people are digging foRead more

    The reason I am struggling with setting is the technology. WW2 affords the luxury of no mobile phones, no internet. It is easier to keep him in the dark.

    From McGuffin POV it might be possible (tricky but possible) to have the audience learn what he knows as he figures out what people are digging for.

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  2. Posted: April 21, 2016In: Comedy

    When a Talent Agency for Dogs loses its star, a secretary sees an opportunity for his own pooch. He ?just? has to convince the owner, a bellicose alcoholic, the mid divorce casting director and the psychotic German client while the pooch needs to overcome its stage fright.

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    Added an answer on April 21, 2016 at 3:34 am

    Works for me. I know the story enough to sees if I want to read more.

    Works for me. I know the story enough to sees if I want to read more.

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  3. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Comedy

    A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.

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    Added an answer on April 20, 2016 at 8:19 am

    If it is an ensemble try something like: A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert. Not great but how I may approach it.

    If it is an ensemble try something like:

    A boss mid divorce, a secretary who wants to come out and a cast director who wants to quit struggle with their problems and trying to find a dog for a massive beer advert.

    Not great but how I may approach it.

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