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A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.
A Muslim convert discovers he is setup to take the fall for a train bombing... Now his goal and what is stopping him. He must rescue his fellow passengers and the identity of the real bomber to clean his name. You seem to gloss over the real story. Here is I hope an amusing comparison. Adolf HitlerRead more
A Muslim convert discovers he is setup to take the fall for a train bombing… Now his goal and what is stopping him.
He must rescue his fellow passengers and the identity of the real bomber to clean his name.
You seem to gloss over the real story.
Here is I hope an amusing comparison.
Adolf Hitler and Eva travel through Europe, he then is involved in WW2.
Think about your story in minutes. Is most of the story about his conversion or the train. If it is the train start there.
Discovering a bomb in his luggage a young Muslim must evacuate his fellow train passenger and prove his own innocents.
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To ?make his dying wife happy an ill-tempered has-been rock star enters a singing contest, which reignites his passion for performing. ?He must survive the competition and a judge determined to get him out to ?...... I hope this helps.
To ?make his dying wife happy an ill-tempered has-been rock star enters a singing contest, which reignites his passion for performing. ?He must survive the competition and a judge determined to get him out to ?……
I hope this helps.
See lessA troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.
I think you are focusing on the setup to much. ?I take most of the story will be on the train. ?His goals will be on the train. ?Write out what happens on the train as dot points. ?You'll see the story and the logline. ?Just a guess, but I think you know the start better than the end.
I think you are focusing on the setup to much. ?I take most of the story will be on the train. ?His goals will be on the train. ?Write out what happens on the train as dot points. ?You’ll see the story and the logline. ?Just a guess, but I think you know the start better than the end.
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