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  1. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 8, 2016 at 8:05 pm

    No, many bad guys. ?He sees a passenger that needs avenging and carries out revenge. ?He doesn't have to change, think of?rorschach in Watchmen. ?He never changes and is willing to die rather than change. The main question is "can we endorse bad things done for a good reason". ?Can we resolve a badRead more

    No, many bad guys. ?He sees a passenger that needs avenging and carries out revenge. ?He doesn’t have to change, think of?rorschach in Watchmen. ?He never changes and is willing to die rather than change.

    The main question is “can we endorse bad things done for a good reason”. ?Can we resolve a bad outcome from a good act, just because it is a good act. ?I’ll post a new version soon. Still thinking it through.

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  2. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 7, 2016 at 8:21 pm

    Thanks. Here are the beats. Believes he is getting revenge for people that cannot like Archangel Ragaul. Confesses to Priest constantly (a reliable narrator - exposition tool). The cops kill him. Ending his rein of justifiable murders. Narative arc, he is doing what people think they would do if theRead more

    Thanks.

    Here are the beats.

    Believes he is getting revenge for people that cannot like Archangel Ragaul.
    Confesses to Priest constantly (a reliable narrator – exposition tool).
    The cops kill him. Ending his rein of justifiable murders.

    Narative arc, he is doing what people think they would do if they wouldn’t get caught. The “better hope the cops get you before I do” mentality in all of us. ?His mental illness gives the audience a chance to see him as a victim as well. ?The priest is a voice of reason. ?When the cops kill him, the audience will know it was the right thing. ?But also know so much wrong will go unpunished.

    Dexter potential parallels, but not cute or charming. ?This is real mental illness not TV mental illness.
    Taxi Driver, just the car. ?Taxi Driver wanted to fix the world. ?This guy wants to punish the wicked, he sees the world as a good place where predators have to be culled. ?May be tricky to escape the comparison in a logline.

    I’ll post a new version once I have one. Any attempts would be appreciated.

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  3. Posted: April 6, 2016In: Noir

    A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 6, 2016 at 10:41 pm

    Goes without saying mentally ill. ?Believes the archangel Ragaul (revenge) is working through him. I want to story to focus on a person doing bad things for a good reason and a cop that will be doing a good thing, catching him which will result in bad things going unpunished. thanks in advance.

    Goes without saying mentally ill. ?Believes the archangel Ragaul (revenge) is working through him. I want to story to focus on a person doing bad things for a good reason and a cop that will be doing a good thing, catching him which will result in bad things going unpunished.

    thanks in advance.

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