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Needs a little something more. ?It is a good premise, but how does the conflict play out.
Needs a little something more. ?It is a good premise, but how does the conflict play out.
See lessWhen a disguised terrorist on a mission in his country sets him up in a train bomb attack, a dropout battles to evacuate panicking passengers who will be killed in his name.
The dropout is a character discription that isn't that specific. ?So try for something else. ?In a previous version, I think the terrorist was the teacher/professor. ?So rather than say how he left study, perhaps just ex-student. ?Does it even progress the story? "discovering a bomb on a train and rRead more
The dropout is a character discription that isn’t that specific. ?So try for something else. ?In a previous version, I think the terrorist was the teacher/professor. ?So rather than say how he left study, perhaps just ex-student. ?Does it even progress the story?
“discovering a bomb on a train and realising he has been framed as the bomber by his sleeper cell terrorist ex-professor. A (description ) must try and evacuate passenger before it explodes saving the people and his reputation”
The last bit may not be needed. ?But this is first draft attempt.
See lessA serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.
FFF the simple is always the best. ?His motivation is to do gods work. ?But thinks on your version. His sin that he is atoning for could be the trigger of his own insanity. nice work.... Thank you.
FFF the simple is always the best. ?His motivation is to do gods work. ?But thinks on your version. His sin that he is atoning for could be the trigger of his own insanity.
nice work…. Thank you.
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