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  1. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Thriller

    Waking up in hospital a soldier is told it is three years after his last memory. But people seem to be very interested about what he remembers about the war. He must figure out if he is sick or part of an elaborate scam to get information.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 20, 2016 at 8:13 am

    1) he begins to like the life he sees, but is suspicious. He is torn and has mixed emotions. 2) he is suspicious the entire time and tries to do a double bluff back on them which makes him appear paranoid. In 1 audience knows what is happening In 2 audience is with him learning as it goes. iPhone onRead more

    1) he begins to like the life he sees, but is suspicious. He is torn and has mixed emotions.

    2) he is suspicious the entire time and tries to do a double bluff back on them which makes him appear paranoid.

    In 1 audience knows what is happening

    In 2 audience is with him learning as it goes.

    iPhone on train -forgive typos

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  2. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Thriller

    Waking up in hospital a soldier is told it is three years after his last memory. But people seem to be very interested about what he remembers about the war. He must figure out if he is sick or part of an elaborate scam to get information.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 19, 2016 at 11:09 pm

    The story detail. He is greeted by a wife and friends he doesn't remember. ?He is told he was captured during the war, fell in love and now lives here, in what was enemy territory. ?Is it true or part of a scam to get information out of him?

    The story detail. He is greeted by a wife and friends he doesn’t remember. ?He is told he was captured during the war, fell in love and now lives here, in what was enemy territory. ?Is it true or part of a scam to get information out of him?

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  3. Posted: August 31, 2015In: Public

    A once indulgent father now battles his spoiled children who are stealing his retirement money.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 19, 2016 at 1:24 pm

    Even if you don't want to cover off the inciting incident, it may be good to put it into a scenario to give it context. ?What is motivating his battle with his children? ?Perhaps just a "After discovering that adult children have been stealing his retirement money a (potential description) has to doRead more

    Even if you don’t want to cover off the inciting incident, it may be good to put it into a scenario to give it context. ?What is motivating his battle with his children? ?Perhaps just a “After discovering that adult children have been stealing his retirement money a (potential description) has to do battle (what does that look like) to get his money back.

    The “do battle” is that a court room drama or a family fight. ?His he scamming them to get his money back or just arguing his head off. ?Cramming all this into a few lines is very difficult.

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