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  1. Posted: September 16, 2015In: SciFi

    With Earth on the brink of destruction, a despairing shuttle pilot leads a team to explore parallel worlds for a new home, but each new Earth they find has already met a cataclysmic fate within a year of own.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 17, 2015 at 7:50 am

    There is the well worn path of the bigger picture reflecting the internal struggle of the main character. Which is a handy device. 'with earth's death eminent a ship is sent to find a new planet. The only options are all copies of earth on the same path to our horrible fate". Replace ship with MC anRead more

    There is the well worn path of the bigger picture reflecting the internal struggle of the main character. Which is a handy device.

    ‘with earth’s death eminent a ship is sent to find a new planet. The only options are all copies of earth on the same path to our horrible fate”.

    Replace ship with MC and you have my take of your story.

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  2. Posted: September 15, 2015In: Public

    A charming hired hand falls for the same idealistic young woman as his close friend, an emerging revolutionary after they are driven to the rural south by growing violence and corruption in the city. (Besides log line help, would like to know if you would watch this movie?)

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 17, 2015 at 7:40 am

    Escaping not escape, working from a phone..

    Escaping not escape, working from a phone..

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  3. Posted: September 15, 2015In: Public

    A charming hired hand falls for the same idealistic young woman as his close friend, an emerging revolutionary after they are driven to the rural south by growing violence and corruption in the city. (Besides log line help, would like to know if you would watch this movie?)

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 17, 2015 at 7:37 am

    One question is the girl already his friends girl friend? That makes a slight difference to the line. Escape a city in the grips of revolution a hired hand falls for the girlfriend of his revolutionary friend.

    One question is the girl already his friends girl friend? That makes a slight difference to the line.

    Escape a city in the grips of revolution a hired hand falls for the girlfriend of his revolutionary friend.

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