1. Posted: September 28, 2015In: ,

    Seeking revenge for her sexual assault a woman crosses the line into vigilante; she is now hunted by police and the community she believes she protects.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Here is the story so far.? She is a self-defence teacher that has little respect for women that stay in abusive relationships.? She is attacked, ?panics? and doesn?t fight (yes different motivations to an abusive relationship).? She is helped by a police officer but can?t get over the trauma.? She gRead more

    Here is the story so far.? She is a self-defence teacher that has little respect for women that stay in abusive relationships.? She is attacked, ?panics? and doesn?t fight (yes different motivations to an abusive relationship).? She is helped by a police officer but can?t get over the trauma.? She goes on a revenge spree.? During the spree she accidentally kills the wrong person who turns out to be evil.

    She crosses the line into vigilantism.? She now cruises the streets looking to avenge victims of crime.? The community like her the cops see her as a serial killer.? Finally she is forced to choose between saving the cop that helped her and getting caught.? She chooses to let the cop die to continue her work.? The community now hates her as well.? This is just some big points not the entire story.

    I need to add some specific goals to create a story to follow as well as the threats to throw at her.? But this is the world so far.? It may be a little ?Run of the mill? I am thinking of an ultra-violent female anti-hero walking on the edge of insanity.

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  2. Posted: September 27, 2015In:

    A gangster keen to keep street credibility and protect his boss who wants to go legit will do anything including killing the bosses son.

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    The problem I am facing is it is an epic. Which means it is a story about a number of people against a backdrop. The second in charge is the main motivator to story. But the son has most of the screen time. The boss is trying to build a legit empire, but his second in charge who is still very 'streeRead more

    The problem I am facing is it is an epic. Which means it is a story about a number of people against a backdrop.

    The second in charge is the main motivator to story. But the son has most of the screen time. The boss is trying to build a legit empire, but his second in charge who is still very ‘street’ . He is keen to rule with an iron fist at the street level, which is undermining the boss.

    When the bosses son gets in trouble the second in charge is willing to have him killed to be seen as tough.

    These are a few beats, but there is a lot more happening.

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  3. Posted: September 27, 2015In:

    A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, insisting he has proof that one of them is a government agent.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I'd put it in term of action. A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, by convince the group their is a traitor in their ranks. saying insisting doesn't show the impact on the group.

    I’d put it in term of action.

    A group of young activists abduct a senior politician and use a psychological mind game to extract a murder confession but he turns the game around, by convince the group their is a traitor in their ranks.

    saying insisting doesn’t show the impact on the group.

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