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When a lab experiment goes horribly wrong, a clumsy scientist and his two pretty female assistants become the first highly intelligent zombies. Not willing to share their newly found powers with the knowledge hungry human elite that forcefully tries to get bitten, they barricade themselves in their research facility trying to find a cure for their own uncontrollable hunger and bad looks, before turning on themselves. But cure or no cure ? they still have to find a way out!
The thing I find a little strange is "clumsy" and a focus on "good looks". ?You have it down as a horror but reads as a comedy. I can can almost see a story. ?But why not just spread the virus for the good of mankind. ?Everyone gets powers, we keep our intelligence and beauty is redefined. ?I am misRead more
The thing I find a little strange is “clumsy” and a focus on “good looks”. ?You have it down as a horror but reads as a comedy.
I can can almost see a story. ?But why not just spread the virus for the good of mankind. ?Everyone gets powers, we keep our intelligence and beauty is redefined. ?I am missing the internal logic. ?I have no doubt it is in your story, but I can’t see it in the logline.
i wish I had more to offer.
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Come on. ?The Lion King is Hamlet. Move it to a huge corporation like the Murdocks.
Come on. ?The Lion King is Hamlet.
Move it to a huge corporation like the Murdocks.
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It is just a little wordy and there are words not working for me. Begrudgingly isn't the right word for me and I am unsure it is needed. What about:After visions of an apocalypse a woman starts assassinating the people that will cause it when her son from the future comes back to kill her and bringRead more
It is just a little wordy and there are words not working for me. Begrudgingly isn’t the right word for me and I am unsure it is needed. What about:
After visions of an apocalypse a woman starts assassinating the people that will cause it when her son from the future comes back to kill her and bring about the end of the world.
Still too wordy, but more action focused.
Hope it helps.
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