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A well-liked young man is found dead in the city?s reservoir. The police rule it an accident but the victim?s best friend ? a recently paroled thief ? learns the deceased had his greedy fingers in many dangerous pies. With help from friends and family, his investigation draws the attention of local thugs, corrupt cops, and the head of a multi-national, and he soon realizes there is no one he can trust.
Suspecting a friend's death wasn't an accident a parolee.... You also need to add what he wants to happen. ..... wants those responsible bought to justice. ?Starting a battle to the death with thugs, corrupt cops and multinationals. We need to know "who", "what they want", "what happens or what is sRead more
Suspecting a friend’s death wasn’t an accident a parolee….
You also need to add what he wants to happen.
….. wants those responsible bought to justice. ?Starting a battle to the death with thugs, corrupt cops and multinationals.
We need to know “who”, “what they want”, “what happens or what is stopping them” and even “how they over come it”.
See lessAn emotionally shattered lawyer finds salvation in defending an East Indian doctor whose extreme medical practices are both saving lives and putting him on a fast track to prison.
Sounds good. ?Not sure of the lawyers aim, because "finds salvation" sounds like the result, not what he was hoping to achieve. ?But this may be splitting hairs. ?If he was just in it for the money but finds salvation and a new meaning to his life, great. ?So I am not sure if the line needs it, butRead more
Sounds good. ?Not sure of the lawyers aim, because “finds salvation” sounds like the result, not what he was hoping to achieve. ?But this may be splitting hairs. ?If he was just in it for the money but finds salvation and a new meaning to his life, great. ?So I am not sure if the line needs it, but what was he like before finding salvation? ?Emotionally shattered in okay, but how is that transformed by his work with the doctor?
See lessAn impoverished teen drug mule threaten to inform by Police must find a way to get out of the business and save her sister being held as collateral.
V2. ?The story is she is leaving because of police pressure. ?She know her boss will see her as a threat and kill her once he knows the police are sniffing around. ?She only start moving drugs her and her little sister were homeless and needed money. No mention of family. Here's the new line. With tRead more
V2. ?The story is she is leaving because of police pressure. ?She know her boss will see her as a threat and kill her once he knows the police are sniffing around. ?She only start moving drugs her and her little sister were homeless and needed money. No mention of family.
Here’s the new line.
With th her sister being held as collateral by her supplier and being pressured to inform by police a drug mule must do one last run to save them both.
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