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In Sydney, 1959, a Labour politician uncovers a corrupt scheme to terminate the city?s trams. Will he defy his Party or lose the respect of everyone he values, himself included?
A logline isn't a question. ?When marketing a story you may want to leave people with a question (a bit 1970 in my opinion). ?You should state the person, their goal, what triggers their goal and what stands in their way.
A logline isn’t a question. ?When marketing a story you may want to leave people with a question (a bit 1970 in my opinion). ?You should state the person, their goal, what triggers their goal and what stands in their way.
See lessWhen a young fantasy writer encounters a bad boy erotic fiction author, she must learn to escape her fantasy world to revel in her new reality.
I am having trouble with "escape" that implies being trapped. ?That she is somehow wanting to escape, if so, why? ?What is the new reality? What is stopping her? The story is unclear. is she keen to start a relationship and the only thing stopping her is she is mad and lives in a fantasy world.
I am having trouble with “escape” that implies being trapped. ?That she is somehow wanting to escape, if so, why? ?What is the new reality? What is stopping her? The story is unclear.
is she keen to start a relationship and the only thing stopping her is she is mad and lives in a fantasy world.
See lessAn impoverished teen drug mule threaten to inform by Police must find a way to get out of the business and save her sister being held as collateral.
I believe strongly in unlikable protagonists. ?I don't believe a character has to be likable. ?I believe they have to be compelling. ?Breaking Bad, As Good As It Gets... so on and so on. ?I was trying to show that she has no choice. ?Poverty removes all choices. ?The Police are playing on her lack oRead more
I believe strongly in unlikable protagonists. ?I don’t believe a character has to be likable. ?I believe they have to be compelling. ?Breaking Bad, As Good As It Gets… so on and so on. ?I was trying to show that she has no choice. ?Poverty removes all choices. ?The Police are playing on her lack of choice and showing her that they can make it a lot worse.
The reason I have strayed away from “kidnapped” as that it implies a demand. ?Holding her sister is a far more implied threat. ?I want to look at things people do when ?they are pushed and have little choice. ?She has decided to run. ?I think of her as a kid stuck between arguing divorced parents. ?The cops are one parent and her dealer (and the life) is the other.
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