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After the Grim Reaper has guided countless people to the Afterlife, a suitable replacement must don the cowl, so Death can finally rest in peace.
This is a good setting but it doesn't describe the story conflicts. Is the new person happy about the job? Does he have to die? Does the GR want to retire? All that can and must be in the story. Not your story, but here is an example "The Grim Reaper must convince a father to leaves his family and bRead more
This is a good setting but it doesn’t describe the story conflicts.
Is the new person happy about the job?
Does he have to die?
Does the GR want to retire?
All that can and must be in the story. Not your story, but here is an example
“The Grim Reaper must convince a father to leaves his family and become the reaper’s replacement”
See lessThings get dicey when a hitman finds himself sitting with the man who hired him and his proposed victim at a small town diner.
What does the main character want and what is stopping him.?
What does the main character want and what is stopping him.?
See lessDraft2: The Rough-Cut! A ?Thrill-Thirsty? son learns ?Knowledge is a double-edged sword? & promises to wield it wisely, after crossing roads with his Dad (a Celebrated-Police-Officer!). But the son is on the ?Other-Side? of the Law already. The Dad is not sure whom he must protect: The LAW of the Corrupt-Politicians or his SON who has taken their bait!?
Sorry to start so negative. "Be specific", double edged sword, etc tells me nothing. ?I have no idea until the end of what the story is, then it is only a hint.what big thing must Dad have to do? ?What must he do? If it is just decide who to protect, the story will be short. ?If it is just that, whaRead more
Sorry to start so negative. “Be specific”, double edged sword, etc tells me nothing. ?I have no idea until the end of what the story is, then it is only a hint.
what big thing must Dad have to do? ?What must he do? If it is just decide who to protect, the story will be short. ?If it is just that, what does he have to go through to make that decision?
This is my take, it is probably not your story.
“A cop must find a way to bring down corrupt officials while protecting his son involved in their actions” or
“A cop discovers that an investigation into corrupt officials will involve his son. ?He must become as corrupt as them ?to protect his son”
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