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While keeping his unemployment from his wife a man prevents a crime. His lies grow as he becomes a local hero.
The unemployment is what keeps him silent about what he has done. ?His financial mess is the world, not the story. ?The story is he is doing something worthwhile, that gives him meaning, yet he can't tell the people he loves. Hmm will have to have another think how to get it across.
The unemployment is what keeps him silent about what he has done. ?His financial mess is the world, not the story. ?The story is he is doing something worthwhile, that gives him meaning, yet he can’t tell the people he loves.
Hmm will have to have another think how to get it across.
See lessWhen an angel is tasked with showing a suicidal woman what the world would be like if she had never been born, he struggles to find a reason for her to live when they discovers it would be a vvastly better wold without her.
Go watch the director's version of "the butterfly effect". ?It has the same sort of theme, the world is better off without the person. ?I think your theme is good. ?Especially the realisation of the Angel. ?It would challenge all the Angel's belief systems. ?How can all life be sacred when the worldRead more
Go watch the director’s version of “the butterfly effect”. ?It has the same sort of theme, the world is better off without the person. ?I think your theme is good. ?Especially the realisation of the Angel. ?It would challenge all the Angel’s belief systems. ?How can all life be sacred when the world is better by the death of one person.
Well done.
Now for the logline. Take out worlds until it stops making sense. “An Angel shows a suicidal woman…” for example. ?If the Angel talks to the woman, the Angel must have been tasked at some time. ?Focus on the story’s main purpose, you have a good one.
See lessWhile keeping his unemployment from his wife a man prevents a crime. His lies grow as he becomes a local hero.
He gets up, pretends to go to work, uses credit cards etc. He has the financial reins in his family. Which make it harder to admit the failure of unemployment. Suddenly he is "doing good". The one thing that gives his life some meaning and he has to hide it.
He gets up, pretends to go to work, uses credit cards etc. He has the financial reins in his family. Which make it harder to admit the failure of unemployment. Suddenly he is “doing good”. The one thing that gives his life some meaning and he has to hide it.
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