1. Posted: January 13, 2016In:

    A young writer is unknowingly helped to her breaking point to produce a master piece.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Creating a masterpiece and reaching breaking point are not necessarily linked. If they are linked in your story you have to find a way of getting that a cross. It is not obvious in what you have. Plus what is the goal of the main character.

    Creating a masterpiece and reaching breaking point are not necessarily linked. If they are linked in your story you have to find a way of getting that a cross. It is not obvious in what you have.

    Plus what is the goal of the main character.

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  2. Posted: January 5, 2016In:

    A animal activist discovers human experiments not animal during a raid. She must survive murderous security to rescue a test subject and tell the world the truth.

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    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Dpg that is a great point I could use as the lowest point in the story. i think of the as a contained version of Duel, an inciting incident that kicks off a massive series of action events. ?I haven't even considered character traits or flaws yet. ?It is a pure action concept. Nir you are moving itRead more

    Dpg that is a great point I could use as the lowest point in the story.

    i think of the as a contained version of Duel, an inciting incident that kicks off a massive series of action events. ?I haven’t even considered character traits or flaws yet. ?It is a pure action concept.

    Nir you are moving it towards drama, which my normal favourite, but this is my Die Hard. ?She may even take out the main bad guy. ?There could be the opportunity for her to think she’ll give them a chance to change for the greater good, then be doubled crossed. ?This is just a helicopter view of a concept.

    thanks for the help folks.

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  3. Posted: January 8, 2016In:

    REVISED VERSION: While investigating a mysterious murder, a hard-boiled investigative journalist risks his life to stop a corrupt government launching a genetically engineered weapon against an unsuspecting population.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    I have to agree. The weapon is the story and what someone needs to do to stop it. You have used our words to describe the journo that doesn't add to the story. If his personality change is part of the story, add it in. Otherwise focus on the story.

    I have to agree. The weapon is the story and what someone needs to do to stop it. You have used our words to describe the journo that doesn’t add to the story. If his personality change is part of the story, add it in. Otherwise focus on the story.

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